Hello Guys, here are the notes from today's session:
1. Too abrupt transitions (no flow)
2. No proper start and ending (goes straight into the story)
3. Concept is good.
4. Crammed as there is no proper built up.
5. Unexpected scenes
7. No understanding of certain parts of the script.
8. Very negative (quite extreme)
9. Climax of the story isn't there yet.
10. Do not know the characters (Character development)
11. Lines are not there yet.
12. Opportunities for actions with the current lines
13. Too many people dying
14. 1 scene is missing from connecting Anita's suicide. anger, cyber wall.
These are the people that were casted:
Anita - Erica (Understudy:Aneesha)
Devil Anita - Beverly
Angel Anita - Jodie
Beth - Shakthi
Eunice - Alefiya
Ming - Ming Chuan
Benny - Ryan
TJ - Ray
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2. Please be in your PE Attire / Drama Shirt + PE Shorts.
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